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Theroshan
Theroshan
grevous

Posts : 10
Join date : 2008-01-08

Character sheet
Name: grevous
Race: Stygian
Clan: War

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PostSubject: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeTue Jan 08, 2008 9:11 pm

name: grevous

race: Stygian

age: 512

clan: clan of war

character description: grevous is taller than the average person and could be noticed easily in a large group of people. Red eyes that can be seen through the long black hair that covers his face, the cloak helm that cast a shadow on the rest of his face making it hard to see his facial features. Scars on his body that tell the story of his past. They almost glow with the hatred that lives inside him. He does not seem strong when standing in his presence, but he almost has a third eye when fighting.

Character background: grevous used to live in the underground system. His tribeís main tradition was only having one name. He was Young and still dependant on his parents when the famine struck his village, the shaman of the tribe was left with one possibility or so he told the tribe, and that was to make a deal with the beast of hell. He offered their souls for freedom of famine. The beast declined this offer and in an act of pure hate sent armies of hellish demons to attack the village. grevousís parents hid him in a safe location while the whole village was massacred. grevous ran into the city of Tarantia only to be picked up by a rich nobel and was brought up around rich people and in clean buildings, but caused a stir when he did not die by the age of 100.

Character reason for acception: grevous or grev has always wanted to settle down in a city where he can do his part for the army as well as being recognized for his experience of the world and believes this nation is the path of enlightenment.
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Balah
Balah
Varon kaldeer

Posts : 144
Join date : 2008-01-01
Age : 29
Location : England

Character sheet
Name: Dorini Varon Kaldeer of War
Race: Cimmerian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeTue Jan 08, 2008 9:38 pm

Sounds great to me , Now up to you Rashad
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Khalid
Dorini of Damak
Dorini of Damak
Khalid

Posts : 163
Join date : 2007-12-28
Age : 36

Character sheet
Name: Khalid Osahar
Race: Stygian
Clan: Damak

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PostSubject: Re: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeTue Jan 08, 2008 9:48 pm

Looks good to me. And i do hope you have readed up on the lore around Hyboria and the timeline, due to your age. Being that old you should know quite a lot of history and been trough alot. Overall... it's a good application, and you got my vote. Hope you can live up to what you've typed down mate.

I leave the final word to Rashad then.

Cheers.
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Rashad
Dathanar
Dathanar
Rashad

Posts : 738
Join date : 2007-12-28
Age : 31

Character sheet
Name: Rashad Mahdi
Race: Stygian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeTue Jan 08, 2008 10:27 pm

Have some questions I want answered before I can accept this application.

How come your character has red eyes? Stygians generally have dark eyes and I don't think red eyes are common anywhere in Hyboria so where do they come from?

How did your character live for more than a hundred years?
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grevous
Theroshan
Theroshan
grevous

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Name: grevous
Race: Stygian
Clan: War

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PostSubject: Re: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeTue Jan 08, 2008 10:50 pm

he has red eyes due to seeing the portal that summoned the hell creatures and gettin past 500 years is assumingly because he has no soul as the hellish creatures must have taken away the tribes soul even after declining the offer
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Rashad
Dathanar
Dathanar
Rashad

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Join date : 2007-12-28
Age : 31

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Name: Rashad Mahdi
Race: Stygian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeTue Jan 08, 2008 11:44 pm

He is to be seen as an undead creature then? I'm fine with that.
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grevous
Theroshan
Theroshan
grevous

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Name: grevous
Race: Stygian
Clan: War

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PostSubject: Re: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeTue Jan 08, 2008 11:48 pm

does this mean im able to join?
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Rashad
Dathanar
Dathanar
Rashad

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Age : 31

Character sheet
Name: Rashad Mahdi
Race: Stygian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeTue Jan 08, 2008 11:49 pm

Yes. You should have access to the clan of war forum in a moment.
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Theroshan
Theroshan
grevous

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Name: grevous
Race: Stygian
Clan: War

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PostSubject: Re: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeTue Jan 08, 2008 11:51 pm

I thank you.
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Rashad
Dathanar
Dathanar
Rashad

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Age : 31

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Name: Rashad Mahdi
Race: Stygian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeTue Jan 08, 2008 11:51 pm

Though I'm assuming that Varon is okay with that, cause it's really him who decides who gets into the clan of war.
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Varon kaldeer
Balah
Balah
Varon kaldeer

Posts : 144
Join date : 2008-01-01
Age : 29
Location : England

Character sheet
Name: Dorini Varon Kaldeer of War
Race: Cimmerian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeTue Jan 08, 2008 11:56 pm

From what i have heard i will be happy to have him in the Clan of war
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grevous
Theroshan
Theroshan
grevous

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Name: grevous
Race: Stygian
Clan: War

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PostSubject: Re: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeTue Jan 08, 2008 11:58 pm

Then i thank you aswell.
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Ravil
Balah
Balah
Ravil

Posts : 481
Join date : 2008-01-08
Location : England

Character sheet
Name: Ravil Burly
Race: Cimmerian
Clan: Dyma

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PostSubject: Welcome   application: grevous Icon_minitimeWed Jan 09, 2008 12:08 am

Hi,
Nice application, its good to see a intresting story and discription like that

Ravil
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Khalid
Dorini of Damak
Dorini of Damak
Khalid

Posts : 163
Join date : 2007-12-28
Age : 36

Character sheet
Name: Khalid Osahar
Race: Stygian
Clan: Damak

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PostSubject: Re: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeWed Jan 09, 2008 12:22 am

Welcome aboard then mate.
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Theroshan
Theroshan
grevous

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Character sheet
Name: grevous
Race: Stygian
Clan: War

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PostSubject: Re: application: grevous   application: grevous Icon_minitimeFri Jan 11, 2008 5:39 pm

cheers, its good to be accepted
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