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Thorak
Theroshan
Theroshan
Thorak

Posts : 3
Join date : 2008-05-07

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PostSubject: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 12:15 pm

Name: Grishnaka
Race: Aquilonian
Age: 21
Clan: Balance


Description: Grishnaka is tall, strong as a bull, around about 6 ft, long black hair, blue eyes with a scar going down his right eye, olive skin tone. Prefered weapons, shield and sword however like to carry a polearm on his back. Very heavey footed and strong built, big arms and broud shoulders, making him a good armer weilding soilder.

Background: He was brought up in a quiet village in the forest, used to hunting and fighting for what is right. Tought how to fight by his father and never to back down despite all odds. Gained his scars from a close hunting accident, in which he was pounced on by a panther which was able to get a lucky scratch to his right eye. Since that accident Grishnaka became more aware of his surroundings, making him not only strong but smart aswell. However, when a trespasser came into the village, Grishnaka acted with out thinking and killed him. This lead to his village and family banishing him from the village for eternity. He left the village and refuses to be called by his second name. Started to weild dark magic and heavy weapons.

Reason for wanting to join: Grishnaka now wants to find a group of companians in which he can do good with. Where he can live with people that he can call family.
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Saze
Theroshan
Theroshan
Saze

Posts : 16
Join date : 2008-05-06

Character sheet
Name: Saze
Race: Cimmerian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 12:18 pm

I liked this its easy to understand your character what he has been through and how he now wants to live in a safe enviroment with people he can call brothers its good but lets just see what Rashad has to say lol.
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Lapis
Dorini of Lore
Dorini of Lore
Lapis

Posts : 195
Join date : 2008-04-06
Age : 50
Location : Sweden

Character sheet
Name: Lapis Nithotep
Race: Stygian
Clan: Lore

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 12:42 pm

The name is perhaps too close to the orc Grisnhak from Tolkien's "The Two Towers", (or the Black-Metal-singer "Count Grishnak", taken from the same book)
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Alberich
Theroshan
Theroshan
Alberich

Posts : 207
Join date : 2008-04-21
Age : 28
Location : Kent, England

Character sheet
Name: Alberich
Race: Aesir
Clan: Nature

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 3:59 pm

Well rounded application. Good luck to you. Smile
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Varon kaldeer
Balah
Balah
Varon kaldeer

Posts : 144
Join date : 2008-01-01
Age : 29
Location : England

Character sheet
Name: Dorini Varon Kaldeer of War
Race: Cimmerian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 7:24 pm

I have no major problems here. Good luck with the application.
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Rashad
Dathanar
Dathanar
Rashad

Posts : 738
Join date : 2007-12-28
Age : 31

Character sheet
Name: Rashad Mahdi
Race: Stygian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 8:12 pm

Don't see any big issues, seems like a likely reaction from an aquilonian village. Don't really think Grishnaka is a fitting aquilonian name though so I'd suggest to change that.
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Rashad
Dathanar
Dathanar
Rashad

Posts : 738
Join date : 2007-12-28
Age : 31

Character sheet
Name: Rashad Mahdi
Race: Stygian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 8:13 pm

Did you want him Varon? We have alot of people going for Balance right now..
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Ravil
Balah
Balah
Ravil

Posts : 481
Join date : 2008-01-08
Location : England

Character sheet
Name: Ravil Burly
Race: Cimmerian
Clan: Dyma

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 8:17 pm

Welcome to the guild Grishnaka.

Rashad wrote:
We have alot of people going for Balance right now..

I am guessing its just because Balance is seen as the clan with the most action/PvP happening.
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Balah
Balah
Varon kaldeer

Posts : 144
Join date : 2008-01-01
Age : 29
Location : England

Character sheet
Name: Dorini Varon Kaldeer of War
Race: Cimmerian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 8:29 pm

Balance is happy to have him.
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Ravil
Balah
Balah
Ravil

Posts : 481
Join date : 2008-01-08
Location : England

Character sheet
Name: Ravil Burly
Race: Cimmerian
Clan: Dyma

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 8:37 pm

Balance it is, want me to add to the wiki?
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Rashad
Dathanar
Dathanar
Rashad

Posts : 738
Join date : 2007-12-28
Age : 31

Character sheet
Name: Rashad Mahdi
Race: Stygian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 8:41 pm

well you don't have to, but I'd appreciate not having to do the work :p
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Khalid
Dorini of Damak
Dorini of Damak
Khalid

Posts : 163
Join date : 2007-12-28
Age : 36

Character sheet
Name: Khalid Osahar
Race: Stygian
Clan: Damak

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 11:05 pm

Welcome mate Smile
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Anari
Theroshan
Theroshan
Anari

Posts : 133
Join date : 2008-01-09
Location : England

Character sheet
Name: Haseo
Race: Stygian
Clan: Damak

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeThu May 08, 2008 11:11 pm

Welcome!

Haseo Out
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Alberich
Theroshan
Theroshan
Alberich

Posts : 207
Join date : 2008-04-21
Age : 28
Location : Kent, England

Character sheet
Name: Alberich
Race: Aesir
Clan: Nature

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeFri May 09, 2008 3:43 am

Welcome Grishnaka, to the House of the New Dawn!
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Saze
Theroshan
Theroshan
Saze

Posts : 16
Join date : 2008-05-06

Character sheet
Name: Saze
Race: Cimmerian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeFri May 09, 2008 1:52 pm

I think Grishnaka is a good name it shoudnt matter if its close to the Ork in Lord Of The Rings?...

Saze
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Rashad
Dathanar
Dathanar
Rashad

Posts : 738
Join date : 2007-12-28
Age : 31

Character sheet
Name: Rashad Mahdi
Race: Stygian
Clan: Balance

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PostSubject: Re: Grishnaka   Grishnaka Icon_minitimeFri May 09, 2008 2:04 pm

It does matter because it's not really Conan-like.
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